Tuesday, January 19, 2016

Box Poetry


Poetry Cannot Be Contained 
By Serena Cai

Poetry cannot be contained. 

The word "box" brings something, 
a feeling or emotion, to mind.
I know the meaning: it's to shut something 
up in a tight space. To hold something against 
its will. 

That something is poetry.


I was on the Internet just the other day, 
eyes almost glazing over when I 
stumbled upon Reginald Dwayne Betts. 
This man, sentenced to life in a metal box, 
became a life boat in the ocean. 

Lost. 
Adrift. 
Questions spiraled in his head like endless
daggers? Where to go? What to do? 
What to feel? 

IT came like a blinding light, 
a secret angel come in the night. 
IT carried him along like the breeze
and made liberty beat under his 
ragged pulse. 

Words of weavers of words, magicians 
of time, danced on his lips like a child's feet. 
His soul began to beat and his feet began 
to tap. And so did the souls in the box 
next to his. 

It would be ninety six months later 
when he would be released from this cage.
He would become a prison advocate but 
more importantly: he would serve as 
a conduit for words. 

That ragged box of steel lines and broken 
dreams was no barrier to IT. 
Poetry could not be contained. 
It passed along the lips of each prisoner 
and rolled in their minds. 

Poetry will not be contained.

~~~~~~~~~

The poem above is one that I wrote and have constantly edited for the past week. It relates to the story of Reginald Dwayne Betts, a former prisoner and current poet. Betts was arrested for carjacking years ago and in his prison time, he and his fellow prisoners found hope and inspiration in the poems they read. Later, when Betts left prison, he would become a prison advocate and fervent poet. 

His story is connected to my answer to the Box Problem because Betts is proof that poetry goes beyond even that of the metal bars of a prisoner's cell. 
It cannot be contained. 
As hard as you try, no matter how thoroughly and enthusiastically you figuratively stuff that poem into that box, it will never go in. No matter how many ways you twist it and crumble it, some part of that poem will slip out and influence the life of someone near you like it did for Betts and his fellow inmates. Art cannot be contained. 

To understand a poem, I suggest that you never box it up. Boxing something implies holding it against its will. It implies forcing it into a small space not meant for it. 

Instead, if you want to understand a poem, hold it lightly in your mind. Hold it like a question, a query, a gentle inquiry. Lure it out, coax it to reveal its hidden secrets. 

As Billy Collins so gracefully put it, don't "tie the poem to a chair with rope and torture a confession out of it." 


Be gentle with the poem. 
Let it unveil itself to you slowly. 
Peel back each heavy layer of meaning and hope that maybe one day,
you can get to the core. 

~Serena 

5 comments:

  1. I absolutely loved this post! The poem you wrote and how you used the word "IT" to represent the poem and its power really complimented your comparison of Reginald Betts' time in prison to trying to contain a poem in a box. What really stuck out to me was the incorporation of many different pieces to make your point. You use a poem, a written explanation, and a quote that all come together to emphasize that "poetry cannot be contained."

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  2. I love this post, too. It's great that you wrote a poem that contained a moving and important story of a poet trapped in a box. I had heard of Reginald Dwayne Betts on the news recently, and his is a great story to connect to this "problem." This has a wonderful combination of whimsy/lightness and gravity/depth. Nice work, Serena!

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  3. Even though we're in the same group, this is nothing like what I expected, in a really good way. Your poem is surprisingly... poetic. I like its tempo, and it seems to crescendo louder and grow softer in a very soothing way. Ending with a Billy Collins quote was satisfying.

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  4. I love the imagery that you used in the poem, especially the way that you describe Betts as stranded during his time in prison with poetry as his savior. I think that you put a powerful personal spin on the prompt and you showed how poetry can so directly influence someone's life, especially in hard times.

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  5. The background about Betts is very interesting, and the connection between how Betts was in a metal "box" of jail and the fact that poetry cannot be contained in a box is very interesting. The poem you wrote is also great, especially the way you introduced Betts and his emotions and feelings while imprisoned and when he was reading poetry. I had never heard of Betts before reading this post, and I think that going into the poem without any knowledge of who he is made much of the imagery more powerful to me, especially the emotions and thoughts.

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